Hey!
I only just realised how much fun it was to write that huge post of annoying and worthless writing... so I'm going to do it again!!
I just found out that I will not be spending New Years with Cassie after all on account of her parents... actually I don't know she just said that we weren't going so yeahh... boring New Years for me.. hahahaa.
Right now I am on my cousins myspace and he plays guitar and apparently sings but I've never heard him before, so anyway on his myspace his song is "apparently" of him singing and playing guitar and hes actually not that bad.. who would have known! hahahaa.
I just noticed I write "hahahaaa" alot... I'm sorry! hahahaa *slaps self* I did it again!!
*silence..* hahahaa! I'm such a loser sometimes.
oh yeahh! I don't think I got one bad comment about my poem or my picture.. I was expecting flowing hate mail!
I suppose I should post another poem.. I suppose..
okay here it is:
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Someday..
It better to have loved and lost,
Then hide it all and pay the cost,
The pain would not grow less and less,
But grow so large and cause you stress,
He left you lying on the ground,
His gorgeous face you'd like to pound,
But by this fate things are better,
Then if you'd never sent that letter,
Since he put you through that pain,
He doesn;t deserve your space of brain,
So leave him now and walk away,
He'll regret he lost you someday,
Someday...
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how do ya like it? let me know!
and just before you ask, I do try and make most of my poems rhyme, I don't know why.. I like rhyming poems but I have been told that rhyming takes out meaning, it's sounds so professional when I say it like that hahaa but apparently it makes it sound like a kids cartoon..
at least thats what one of my friends told me...
what do you guys think?
By the way, you are the first people to hear any of these poems, many people have tried to steal my journal and read them, but they all failed hahahaa (oops I did it again! [hahahaa thats a song =P] )
Umm.. what else.. I just got a text!
it's from Sam, it says:
"hey, wats up?"
hahahaa the same old text, nearly every text I get says that.. random.. when Jade and I were friends she once sent me that text 20 times in a row, I'm not even exaggerating a little bit. 20 TIMES! hahahaa
I thinks thats all I have to say, it's longer then I usually do! but yeahh..
Kimmiixox
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Actually, I don't really notice when people do things repetitively, seeing as how I do it as well, lol. Mostly it's stuff like " :] " or something, but yah. So my point is that I didn't notice that you say hahaha a lot. xD
Sooooooo, my view on the poem.
It was really good, it actually told a story of sorts, I liked it.
Keep writing poems, you're good at it!
And I think the whole rhyming thing depends; I mean, sometimes when people try to make their poems rhyme, it makes it lose all sense of meaning, because they're just coming up with random words. But I think, if you're able to keep the whole meaningness of the poem there while making it rhyme, it's all the better.
Hmmm... darnit all, I gotta go.
Thanks for posting another poem. :]
And on the subject of repetitiveness (along with the fact I'm a total freak...)
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Heh... yah. Okay. xD
<3 <3 <3
~Sammy
xo hi hi xo
It's akay to repeat stuff I repeat "xo" a LOT so yah.
Luved the poem. As for the rhyming... agree with sam. I usually don't make mine ryme cuz they're all usually hate and strong words and I don't hate poems should rhyme.
I just wrote one actually it's about stupid dummy head Emma. Ugh. It's called your not worth it. It's a modern poem and it has "hating" and new slang words in it. I wrote it in a huff so Im not proud of it but whatever.
And to continue the streak of repetitiveness......(and because Im a freak like sammy LOL)
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Sick of 'em yet? LOL
That's it.
xo bi bi xo
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i never noticed you said hahaaaa alot because it just goes into the writing like you laugh then i laugh then everyones laughing yay. lol
i tend to say lol and =] alot
i really liked the poem, and i dont think its "unprofessional" to have it rhyme coz then it just kinda flows
i tend to get those texts alot that say hey whatcha doin and stuff
well to keep up with the streak of retarded repetitiveness [big word!]
lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =] lol =]
that was fun
xxo
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